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No one knows who I truly am
Few have become my friends
I知 battered inside
I cling to anyone who helps me
I知 alone
Forever

No one knows how much I hurt
The pain that runs through me
The hurt deep within my being
My urges that cannot be filled
Someone help me
Please

I am so broken that I cannot be fixed
No one loves me
They tell me they do
But do they
Oh God, make it stop
The pain

I never cry
I never falter
I fade, into nothing
My heart is black as ice

I am weak
I am pathetic
I am nothing
I am disappointment

I feel the pain and hurt
Absorb it within my being
I bottle everything up
My defenses are weakening
The walls that keep me numb are breaking
Shattering

My Saviour's are coming
They池e picking me up
Holding me
Don稚 leave me
I need you
Please, don稚 ever leave me

They give me strength
They give me courage
They treat me with kindness
They love me
©2006-2009 =VampiricGoddess
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Author's Comments

Hmm, I don't think it's finished, but I don't have anything else in my mind...

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:iconancientartifact:
very emotional, i like it :D
:iconraistlindantilus:
I prefer rhyme in poetry, but

"My heart is black as ice"

really caught my eye. Its a wonderful expression. Overall its a decent poem, probably better than I think simply because a lack of rhyme turns me off (even in my own poems that don't rhyme)

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:iconnavajo-sunshine:
I love it. I like how it makes me relate calling to mind memories of the same thing.

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~Child Of Atlas~
:iconukozo:
wow. really poignant stuff. very raw.
I feel many of these things about my own life :nod:

I see you wrote this years ago... do you still feel this way though? do you feel better?

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:iconvampiricgoddess:
At times, I find that I'm in the exact place when I first wrote this poem. Other times, I find that I enjoy life to it's fullest. I feel so light inside. Like a great weight has been released from my shoulders. I guess it all depends on how my mood is, or if there's a sudden change in my day-to-day goings.

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"Sara:Clothing, $85. Earrings, $30. Latte, $4. Getting away with murder... Priceless." CSI 'Coming of Rage'
:iconukozo:
well... ukozo is glad you feel good more often than you did :)

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