No one knows who I truly am
Few have become my friends
I知 battered inside
I cling to anyone who helps me
I知 alone
Forever
No one knows how much I hurt
The pain that runs through me
The hurt deep within my being
My urges that cannot be filled
Someone help me
Please
I am so broken that I cannot be fixed
No one loves me
They tell me they do
But do they
Oh God, make it stop
The pain
I never cry
I never falter
I fade, into nothing
My heart is black as ice
I am weak
I am pathetic
I am nothing
I am disappointment
I feel the pain and hurt
Absorb it within my being
I bottle everything up
My defenses are weakening
The walls that keep me numb are breaking
Shattering
My Saviour's are coming
They池e picking me up
Holding me
Don稚 leave me
I need you
Please, don稚 ever leave me
They give me strength
They give me courage
They treat me with kindness
They love me













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"My heart is black as ice"
really caught my eye. Its a wonderful expression. Overall its a decent poem, probably better than I think simply because a lack of rhyme turns me off (even in my own poems that don't rhyme)
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~Child Of Atlas~
I feel many of these things about my own life
I see you wrote this years ago... do you still feel this way though? do you feel better?
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"Sara:Clothing, $85. Earrings, $30. Latte, $4. Getting away with murder... Priceless." CSI 'Coming of Rage'
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